Avatar Author: Elisabeth L. Davis(LoA) Beneath the regular writers sits a young girl, pen trembling in her hand. She tries to put words on paper, but nothing comes out but painfully choppy verse. She drops the pen, looking up at the regulars in their creative ... Read Bio

Aria stared at the azure sky, slowly turning a quiet midnight. Sunset didn’t seem to happen here; it was just day, and then it was night. A gentle transition from a sea of darkened cornflower to borderlining navy… beautiful, albeit strange.

She picked up an indigo hairband and tied her midback length ultramarine hair into a tight ponytail. She didn’t figure anyone would care that her hair was down under the dim streetlights that dotted the street and were slowly turning on, but she couldn’t stand how it covered her arms when she walked.

She picked up her denim purse, amazed at the weight of the thing, and walked outside. She made her way to a bus stop and noticed him sitting there. She moved over to him and whispered in his ear. He smiled as she handed him her purse.

He pulled out a bloody knife and several thousand dollars worth of sapphires.

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  1. Avatar Elisabeth L. Davis(LoA)

    I don’t know if the gem at the end counts but I wanted to make it fit.. and diamonds were just so cliche.

  2. Avatar Saint Chuck

    I like the all around theme of blue, it fits very nicely.

  3. Avatar .:Band Baby:.

    oh my! totally didn’t see this coming. and i agree wth Chuck, i like the blue them =)

  4. Avatar Valerie

    Love the end. Twisty! :)

  5. Avatar blusparrow (LoA)

    I love it, so much blue. I hope I can still do blue without you getting angry sis. You know how much I love the color.

  6. Avatar Elisabeth L. Davis(LoA)

    Haha not a problem.

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  8. Avatar The Fantastic Mister Fish

    good though
    yesyes very

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