A Real Concert

Avatar Author: StudMuffin (LoA) I'm 20. I live in Hastings, UK. Uhhh I'm going to school for illustration, but sometimes I just, like, love writing. Back when I was 15, I was a member of this site in it's earliest days and I stopped using it after ... Read Bio

The crowd went wild.
They threw their hands into the air, praising him.
He loved every second of it.
He left the microphone, leaving them wanting more.
He walked around on the stage, listening to them cheer his name.
It was orgasmic.
He stood there for a minute, leaving them in anticipation.
Was it the end of his performance?
Was he going to leave?
He walked up to the microphone, the people with their arm bands, their army uniforms, their blonde hair, blue eyes.
He threw his hand into the air, palm side down.
“Tod den Juden! Heil Hitler!” he screamed into the microphone.
The crowd went wild.

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  1. Avatar StayGold

    you’ve done it again, Muffy!

  2. Avatar Elisabeth L. Davis(LoA)

    I read this. I like it. This is the end of my comment.

  3. Avatar StayGold

    p.s. whatever happened to “Mufficide”?

  4. Avatar StudMuffin (LoA)

    I have no ideas

  5. Avatar Mighty-Joe Young (A.K.A Strong Coffee)(LoA)

    awesome but delete the tags, we arent SHEEP, we are writers we can think on our own.

  6. Avatar The Fantastic Mister Fish

    im not a sheep. im a fish.
    the word orgasmic makes me laugh because of the rusty spoons.
    i hate hitler.
    the end.

  7. Avatar StayGold

    alrighty well when you get some, lemme know! =)

  8. Avatar StudMuffin (LoA)

    No problemo

  9. Avatar gĀ²LaPianistaIrlandesa

    Certainly didn’t see that coming. Nicely done!

  10. Avatar ElshaHawk (LoA)

    see me comment? I read it. I leave note.
    This was misleading, great twist!

  11. Avatar Mighty-Joe Young (A.K.A Strong Coffee)(LoA)

    Really muff you are a golden God

  12. Avatar StudMuffin (LoA)

    Apoc, thats facking hilarious.

  13. Avatar Twyst

    Godwins law.

  14. Avatar ethelthefrog

    Godwin’s Law applies to interwebnet discussions, not works of fiction. So ner.

    Nice twist there, Mr. Muffin.

  15. Avatar StudMuffin (LoA)

    I feel very honored
    :D Thanks to all!!!

  16. Avatar Twyst

    I know, I thought it was funny if enough story posting lead down the same path as a usenet discussion.

  17. Avatar StudMuffin (LoA)


  18. Avatar ethelthefrog

    Twyst, I think we’re showing our age. StudMuffin here wasn’t even born when us oldies first set sail on usenet, when gopher was the way you found stuff and Netscape was shiny and new.

    Hey ho.

  19. Amj Lone Writer

    I think I just died a little. No joke.
    Awesome job, that’s the most unexpected twist I’ve ever seen. My jaw actually dropped. :D

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  21. Avatar Marli

    To think I was going to give this a five….. sorry Muffy have ten.

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