Another Revelation (part 2)

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Hence, I have come to accept the fact that in the end, each and every mortal being will have long since proven and exploited his or her own wickedness, whether intentionally or not. But even so, there will only be a few who thoroughly fail themselves. Furthermore, within those few will be but one who possesses all of the faults of humanity and then some, and that one will be beyond redemption in every aspect.
As the imperfect yet hopeful people of the world cry out, “We shall be saved! We shall be saved!”, the beast will attempt to capture and obliterate the most innocent and optimistic of them all. But if these chosen ones have strength interwoven into their essence, so as to have the deepest kind of faith, then they will not only save themselves, but the whole world as well.

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  1. Avatar Mighty-Joe Young (A.K.A Strong Coffee)(LoA)

    this sound like it will be goood

  2. Avatar ethelthefrog

    Hey, dudette. You don’t have to save the world. Some things are best left to Christ…

  3. Avatar SaveTheUnicorns

    Exactly. He is the Chosen One.

  4. Avatar ElshaHawk (LoA)

    you can’t save the world, the world has free will, you can save yourself, by putting your faith in One and making up your mind. You can tell others, you can persuade others, but you can’t save them.
    Nice revelatory piece!

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Another Revelation (part 1) by SaveTheUnicorns