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B is for Bravery

Avatar Author: Matt McCray I draw and write both code and prose. It's very confusing. < / bio > Read Bio

Why had all the noise stopped? Those things outside were pounding and shaking his shelter — the portapotty — not a minute before. And now, nothing.

Then a shrill scream pierced the air. It was a woman’s terrified voice. Zed understood. He screamed just like that a few hours ago, when he stumbled upon this nest of the undead. Undead… God, that makes me sound like a geek.

Zed peeped out the small slits cut in the portapotty door. He saw the woman, probably in her early thirties, wearing a pants-suit, running away from a horde of shuffling zombies. With grim determination they moved toward her, faster than you would have thought possible.

She was running toward the construction site across the street. But he knew there were more creatures waiting there. Were they actually smart enough to herd her to into a trap?

Zed didn’t have time to ponder about it, he had to stop her before she opened the gate.

“Wait! Stop!” He yelled.

She turned to look at the talking portapotty. The gate opened behind her.

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  1. Ahfl_icon THX 0477

    Nice continuation, and a nice job shifting from more internal thinking to more of the action going on. The last lines got a bit rushed, but that’s what the character limit does, isn’t it?

  2. Avatar ElshaHawk (LoA)

    of course fresh meat would cause them to stop bothering the trapped guy! Go Zed, saving the girl! so now what, she’s comes in the portapotty with him?? I don’t think he thought this through..

  3. Avatar Krulltar

    A is for AMAZING STORY… I love how his pride won’t let him believe something like real zombies and undead are out and about.

  4. Avatar Matt McCray

    @THX 0477: Yeah, it’s surprising how quickly you run up to the 1024 limit!

    @ElshaHawk: Heh, I thought about going there actually… Could be quite funny. But I like where THX’s sequel is going too.

    @Krullltar Thank you very much!

  5. Avatar David Lorell Hoskins

    God you have me on this one! I want to read on… love the gate opening behind her, but am getting anxious just thinking about what’s next. Great imagery, very clear in my head.

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