I only wish I could write better...

Avatar Author: J. Rein B. Was an extremely eccentric 16 year old from the good ol' Philippines. I'm now 18, and I still like science fiction, ambigrams, and other stuff. Read Bio

I’m trying to write a remembrance for a friend,
Whose roots lie a million miles away,
Whose spirit, now even farther,
And yet whose heart reaches out to me, a world away.

I don’t know her, she doesn’t know me,
But our lives connected here.
And that I will treasure forever

My mind and heart extends to Jesi.
She makes me hope there really is a heaven.

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Comments (3 so far!)

  1. Ahfl_icon THX 0477

    Title sets it up nicely, and I liked the last line. Sort of reminds me of the old saying about atheists in foxholes.

  2. Avatar Raegan Dauterive

    Yes, the last line is beautiful.

  3. Avatar Mighty-Joe Young (A.K.A Strong Coffee)(LoA)

    Yes the last makes you kinda of hgope there isnt one cause shelll be stuck walking around here.