I'll story tell you well

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I was out.
Yes, out.
I thought about what may happen.
So I call my sister outside.
I wanted her.
I say to her, “HEY LILY! what would happen?”
She gave me no response.
However, within ten minutes.
I did.
I don’t know.
She got me holding my arm.
There was something pearly white with little stains
white.
VERY white.

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  1. Avatar April Raines

    gigglesnort Ok, but shouldn’t this be sequelled off of Muffy’s since it’s his you’re ‘editing’?

    Nice use of subtly and innuendo – or maybe I just have a dirty mind this afternoon.

    Not sure where the ‘out’ in line 2 came from, edit-wise, but hey it works.

    Good twist, Twyst.

  2. Avatar Krulltar

    gigglesnort ?!?! WTF?

    fun edit of studly’s story.

  3. Avatar Twyst

    Originally I was going to replace key words with other words, as you see ‘roof’ was replaced with ‘out’. Then I just went and chopped out a bunch, forgot I had a different plan, and posted.

    btw I love the word gigglesnort, almost as much as baconflaps.

  4. Avatar ElshaHawk (LoA)

    Well this didn’t flow, it was way too choppy.. you should have stuck with replacing words like a Mad Libs..
    I’m confused about what you are doing here, it’s like half a painting..

  5. Avatar Twyst

    A poet never interprets his work, sorry, it’s up to you to find meaning!

    Isn’t it so much easier when you don’t have to explain your bad writing to anyone by claiming its exactly what you meant to do? What fulfillment I find in pretentious art!

  6. Avatar The Fantastic Mister Fish

    i dont get it.

  7. Avatar StudMuffin (LoA)

    teehee.
    Only thing, Lily is my SISTER!!!
    Maybe you should like…. sequel my story with a mad libbed version or something.
    Oh, hang on…..

  8. Avatar Eloquent Mess {(LoA)}

    O.o?

    You’ve lost me.

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