I Believe

Avatar Author: Spageti Hail, good sir, or madame (I musn't forget the *superior* sex! ;-] ). My name is Spageti. Good to make your acquaintance. I was born leagues away in a quaint place Christianed as Hamptonshire. My pappy was a writer of ye ... Read Bio

I believe in sanctity. Cool by touch, warm of smell, infatuating through hearing. There is no quality I would rather my dear bear have.

I believe in a world where chocolate is free, and flows through all rivers, and all rivers flow north, and we meet in Hamptonshire—just not yet…

I believe I can fly.

I believe I can touch the sky. I think about it every night and day. Spread my wings and fly away…

I believe I can fly.

I believe I can soar.

I believe in open doors… o.O"

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  1. Avatar Krulltar

    not much couth in sequeling a story that was written in rememberance of someone, but hey that’s what ficly is all aboot. Sequeling that is. BUT.. Quoting an R. Kelly song was a bit uncalled for; that means NO STARS for you; zip, zero, nada, zilch. I’m just glad you didn’t use Warrant or Chumbawamba lyrics. for that I’m greatful.

  2. Avatar Spageti

    That is not an R. Kelly song, youngster. This is an R. Kelly song: “Can I get a poop, poop? Can I get a pee, pee? This is the remix edition about a song about pissin’…”

  3. Avatar Krulltar

    Egads, my dear Sir! Don’t be completely gromy; whether he’s singing about pissin’ or flyin’, it’s still R. “she didn’t look 14 to me” Kelly.

  4. Avatar Eloquent Mess {(LoA)}

    Totally out of line, Spageti. I know ficly is about having fun, and I know you enjoy sequeling stories with random stuff because you find it entertaining…

    But this was a tribute to a friend who has passed away. A loving memory. It was heartfelt and took a lot of time and consideration to write.

    This is the lowest I’ve seen you go. Have some respect for our dearly departed.

    One pencil because this is the most offensive thing anyone’s done on ficly. And because you had the gall to give this trash 5 pencils, rate your own filth.

  5. Avatar Señor Carpín

    wtf?

  6. Avatar Radical Yellow Duck

    Perhaps it is because I don’t understand the musical reference made. I don’t know who R.Kelly is. But a rememberence of Jesi, now in a place where chocolate flows in rivers, where people can fly and touch the sky, where doors are open, does not seem inappropriate to me.

    Where she is, she is now at peace. And I would hope, able to now do things we can only dream of.

    If there is a lack of respect here for Jesi and the loss her family feels. then I missed it. If it is there, please don’t point it out to me. I would rather remain ignorant of something like that.

  7. Avatar Eloquent Mess {(LoA)}

    I’ll keep it quiet, then. My objection to this is the tone of mockery, and the comment made below it.

  8. Avatar Kater

    I have to agree with Eloquent Mess. Negative pencils for sequeling a beautiful story for Jesi with R. Kelly. I understand that likely, you enjoy “trolling” internet forums or websites. But please have some human decency.

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