happy, yet sad

Avatar Author: Junchaya "Writting lyric's is like therapy; You write down all your problems and make it into something good." - Junchaya I love to read and write. I have been writting song lyrics ever since I was eleven. Read Bio

im a loser you see
with no dignity at all.
i could be happy and modest
but then you ruin it all
I’m dreaming of that tomorrow,
I’m dreaming for that wish,
I’m dreaming i can smile
and
finally
be at bliss

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  1. Avatar emily.ruth

    sweet. try breaking the lines up some, it would make it easier to follow the rhythm.

  2. Avatar StudMuffin (LoA)

    niiice,
    just break up the lines.
    I’ll change my rating if ya doooo! lol

  3. Avatar Mighty-Joe Young (A.K.A Strong Coffee)(LoA)

    im a loser you see
    with no dignity at all.
    i could be happy and modest
    but then you ruin it all
    I’m dreaming of that tomorrow,
    I’m dreaming for that wish,
    I’m dreaming i can smile
    and
    finally
    be at bliss
    This is how i would break it up, but its good.
    Plus tomorrow is misspelled
    Welcome to ficly nice pic.
    If you get some friends and comment on some stories you should be able to attract some readers nice to meet you.

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