Crime of Passion? - Prequel

Avatar Author: pettins Never written anything fictional since some failed attempts at school. But willing to give it a go, on the basis that this is a loving community and anyway, feedback is the best medicine...or something :-) Read Bio

Physics was dull today. In fact it was dull every day.

Why did he have to study this stuff? Would it make any difference to his future?

He secretly hoped that his future would involve “her”. He stared across the classroom at her for the 15th time that class. She was gorgeous. Why would she want to go out with him?

“You boy”, barked the teacher angrily. “What did I just say? Or are you more interested in this young lady?”

He blushed. She blushed. Unaware that he had been looking at her.

“Ah well” thought the boy. That’s the cat out of the bag.

Valentines Day, and quite out the blue, he got a card signed “Your Secret Love!”. He couldn’t believe it. It was clearly the writing of the girl, yes “her”.

Invigorated by the promise of a chance to be close to her, he made his approach after Chemistry and asked her out.

“Why would I want to do that” she replied curtly, rushing off to Hockey. He was crushed.

The pranksters who actually wrote the card sniggered…unaware of where things would lead…

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  1. Avatar ernmander

    Fabulous, love the fact that you used high school as a setting. Not what I expected, but totally loved it.

  2. Avatar pettins

    Yep, I was thinking how to get a twist into it and thought it would be good to go all the way back to High School….but still had in mind that many years passed before your story….kinda like a ten year obsession maybe?

  3. Avatar ernmander

    yes that is the same thoughts I had. Perfect, obsessive totally perfect the 10 year idea

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