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Story Elements: The Setting

As they say in Real Estate, “Location, location, location.” In stories though, I begin this blog post not entirely convinced. My brother has a movie he really liked which is basically three people wandering around talking. The setting is a castle or something, but it winds up irrelevant. They could have been anywhere.

On the other hand, ‘The Hunchback of Le Louvre’ just doesn’t have the same ring to it. To put it on a slightly more modern footing, would "Oh Brother, Where Art Thou’ been as funny set in Canada? Okay, it might have been slightly more amusing, depending on the number of moose and back-bacon references.

Then again, and especially in this format, I’ve done whole stories with almost no mention of the location or atmosphere. They’re usually heavy on dialogue. Come to think of it, they usually wind up a little detached and philosophical.

I think what it comes down to is that your setting is an additional character. Like any character the story might survive without it or with an alternate. However, as a character, it deserves at least as much attention as any other character, if not more. After all, the setting will probably be the largest character unless you have a story about giants set on a tiny, tiny island.

Updated by Kevin: Sorry to butt in to THX’s lovely blog post, but I didn’t want to push it off the homepage since he spent so much time writing it. But, I wanted to say thank you to everyone who helped out with the server support project! There’s still time to donate, but we made our goal so as of 9/1, we’ll have hosting paid for for the next year! Also, I had some time this afternoon – so I fixed the search engine. Search is working again (for real this time, not just the tags)!

7 comments Posted 2009-08-23 Author: THX 0477

Comments

  • gĀ²LaPianistaIrlandesa

    A lot of times, unless I’m dead-set on a specific location, I’ll just be very, very general. Unless it’s vital that the story take place in, say, New York City, I’ll just make reference that a particular scene is set in a city. I won’t be specific, because it’s not essential.

    Besides, I like to stay away from being specific about a location with which I’m not personally familiar because I don’t want to screw up any details… I like to get things right.

  • blusparrow (LoA)

    in a way, to me the tone of the story is part of the setting. that is because it gives information about the story that’s not only the dialog. It is true though that setting is not always what makes the story great, it just depends on the style. btw, that’s awesome kev =)

  • Mighty-Joe Young (A.K.A Strong Coffee)(LoA)

    I like this format because often times the reader has to create half the story in their own mind.

  • Wyatt Aapr LoA

    Location, location. Location depends on why the story is written, and who the main characters are. If it’s a bank robbery in a big city, then location doesn’t matter. However if it’s a murder mystery at the Arctic Circle, location and the surrounding matter very much.
    I especially dislike it when the main character going into a library and the author describes every book, without this having to do with the story line.

  • Lone Writer

    Oh Brother Where art thou is an AMAZING movie! Also, yay for the Server Support Project!`

  • April Raines

    Oh, great. Now I want to write a story about giants set on a tiny, tiny island. :)

  • The Note Writer

    I don’t know if the real search is actually up and running.