This is my comment for the challenge entry copy, so I can put my rating here.

Wistful and longingly written with personality and heart showing through.

Ooh, wistuful yes, but painfully real and accurate and sadly true to life. Excellently done and unflinchingly told. And you got mad at me for sending an old alcoholic back to the bottle, little-miss-computer-based-infidelity.

hahahaha! Always the optimist I am!

Very good. The second paragraph chat is a little confusing at the first read-thru, but I got it eventually. Love the final paragraph.