gross, internal probing, ew! You like to write scenes that make you squirm. :) This is full of suspense and great description. Despite my gag reflex acting up, you still earn your pencils.

My mind just always seems to go that route. It takes all kinds, right? Thanks!

OOooo! I like this one. Your writing style reminds me of my own, but more tentacle-y. :)

the switches from past to present tense were a bit strange, but in general I got a bit of a Stargate feel from this.

Definetely sci-fi mixed with horror. Well done!

Yeah, sometimes I struggle with what tense to use and to keep it consistent.

Oooh, scary wince at the end. Nice staory, just watch the verb tense.