Weirdly giddy and playful for a story about submission and bondage. Feels credible though, for a character perhaps not deeply into the lifestyle but dabbling and terribly amused with the possibilities and opportunities.

Wait, it’s wierd for it to be fun? I must be doing it wrong.

Kind of like S&M on a sugar high. The average joe’s experience with bondage. I like it.

Heh, a fair enough assessment. I suppose this is encouragement enough to write more. All I need is inspiration now!