Wow, thats amazing :) Really good ficlet!

its amazing! dare to prequel?

i pictures the chase scene in AI. i liked it.

5/5 amazing!

Excellent!

aha! I shall prequel!! Just let me get more coffee…

off to read the prequel.

quick set up, sort of a sick arena game, leading to the squeeze.. nicely done.

Wow.

I like the energy and the imagery. It would be easier to read a bit broken up.

breaking it up now, mate…

Hello…yay been on one day and I’m featured. Stargazer suggested breaking it up. I have two reasons for not doing i:
1. I ran out of space.
2. I’s symbolic that there’s only room for one body.
Thanks,
Abs
x

I really like your take on this challenge. The sense of movement and action was very good

Congrats on being featured!!

The virtual game. I ran all the way with you. Well done Abby Wall.

A different take on an innocent chilren’s game. Good.

Breathtaking.