i did not quite grasp the interaction between the two.

Kind of odd and out there, which fits the genre. I think it just needs a little more detail to clear up who is coming to the door (I think it’s the droid?). And is the ‘disintegrator fluid’ a product or a natural substance, like from the zombies in ‘Slither’?

Edited. Thanks for your help guys.

wow, had to read that a few times, to catch it all. methinks the salesman is in a dangerous line of work.. :)

why death of a salesman, thats a musical…

O.o I didn’t think it was bad. I thought it was interesting. But am I getting this right, the droids job is to go door to door killing zombies? I did get the part about the pure air and disentegrator fluid. 3 and a half pencils! That is if I could give you that much. So I’ll round it to four. :)