Hmm, an odd mix of prose and poetic verse. Feels like its on the verge of something very deep. Also makes me want to go wandering in the woods.

Yeah I have to confess its not quite where I want it to be yet, but I thought I’d put it out anyway. Happy wandering :-)

This a good mythical suspense feel about it, but unfortunately I’m ready for a let down. I’m almost expecting this something valuable will end up as just another MacGuffin.