Wow. That’s very powerful, I love it. Unfortunately, this appears like it’s someone being saved from a potential addiction, so I’m not sure you met the requirement. Still, great story.

I have revised the story to remove any ambiguity as to addiction.

A writer’s job is to meet editorial requirement without pride or prejudice, even if it means revision.

I belive the story is now qualified, and meets the criterion.

Thanks for inspiring me to make it better than originally written.

Cool, a supernatural story from an AA meeting. So, he was addicted but has now conquered the addiction…though according to most, he’s still addicted, just not acting on it. Certainly has that feel of someone standing solemnly and telling the story.

okay your story trumps mine ;) I think this is the only one that includes some sort of support group, and you threw in an angel for good measure! I was going for outside the box, but you went for filling the box with awesomeness!

Thanks for revising. It definitely works now. :) Nice job.