Okay, so um. This was okay, the emotions just keep popping up though. Haha. When I picture them now they look like cute little critters with wings that float around and have cute high pitched voices. Except fear, he’s still cute but more devilish looking.

…I’m sorry, haha. I just had to point that out.

Also, just one mistake I found. You spelled ditch wrong.

“That she was trying to dich me.”

So, yeah. That’s the only mistake I can find.

Good job, though. :]

Sequeling!

Wait…after NaNo…. promise!

Sequel please!!! It’s such a good story!

I love how this is written and especially how courage jumps in.

I am loving this story, can’t wait to see how this all plays out ^.

Do you know what I just noticed? You changed from Courage to Confidence! Hahaha. Minor, maybe, but thought I should throw that out there.

I like the pun on “kicking in” and Fear getting kicked across the room.