yeah I should be writing my NaNo novel, but no, I am here, commenting..
Without “the” your writing has to be disjointed, which conveys the slipping in and out of consciousness feel very well. Even though it bugs me to read such a fragmented story.

I never suspected my accute addiction to “TH” until I tried to write this story sans “th.”

What an inventive and intriguing challenge.

I could only pull it off by setting it in England, where when the Intercity 125 hits you, you bloody stay hit!

That and morphine distorts memory and the telling of tales.

Wow, what a very detailed writing. Keep it up!

awesome. i would personally have made this a circular nightmare.

Direct quote: “Where’s my bloody knife? I need it to cut the seat belt!” Sorry, but there’s a “th” in the second sentence. Otherwise, great story!

Fixed.

Good catch :)