Very good and unexpected. But why would starvation be a problem if he had a great apartment?
Well, you can’t kill too many people or someone might notice. Plus, he would rather have nice things and sometimes he forgets to eat. Do you see where I’m going with this??
Hmm. I think your title gives a little too much away, but I think that the concept has a lot of potential.
I agree, a lot of potential.
I was a little confused about the nice apartment too, but I can see where you’re going with this. Thanks for entering!
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