Great potential, but it’d be a good idea to seperate it everytime someone new talks, just so we dont get mixed up.

Thanks!!!!!

Omg!!!! best story ever!!! hahaha biffls!!!!

Sequellleddd :D

Cute little bit of adolescent angst. A few grammar things, mostly missing commas here and there. Lots of plot and character details thrown in here, which was good for a story starter.

I’m reading on, so that’s a good sign lol :)

now its 4 friends.