OMG LISA OMG OMG OMG OMG OMGO OMGG! LISSAA ISS BEASSTT!!

OMG! OMG! Lisa is like in a story on ficly, and the story is even more boring than she was when she was going to nickie middle school. OMG! OMG!

Seriously, I love reading stories on ficly (good ones, bad ones, and yes even ugly ones). I’m not trying to be insulting, but my point is this: a little grammer, proper puncutation, and even capitalization helps people want to read your stories. If this was some inside story between the 2 of you, that’s fine, but you could have email it, instead you posted this on a website for the world to read…

I guess what i’m trying to say is … I’ve seen your other stories, and they are pretty good; so just give me a little bit of help in wanting to keep reading them.

OK wow, your making me cry right now cuz im a little self cuotioues. I HATE YOU!!!! lol jk jk but thanks for letting me no i’ll try to make things in my story better frome now, promis!!! :)

I’m glad you took it constructively…I worry that sometimes that I’m a little harsh. I commented because I like most of your writing. :)