I also wrote this in my phone, but this was a while back. Grabbed this from my fanfiction, changed a few things around so it wasn’t for a fandom. Inspired by Ouran High School Host Club.

Let me know if there’s any problems with it or anything.

Constructive criticism is welcome. :]

?????? It that 2 twims in love with each other?

……..Yeah. >.>;

oooohhhh, very naughty. :-o

only problem I had was that some of the wording in the second paragraph felt clumsy. Also, in the 2nd to last paragraph: “He couldn’t feel anymore safe.”… it seems as if English is your second language. Also, there were a few places that you changed present/past tenses.

I need to work I’m my wording… O_o

Haha.

But thank you for pointing those things out :D

Wow hot story. Wish i had a twin. Sensual without being graphic or offensive