ACK! _; Okay, once again this is from my fanfiction. Had to do a lot of re-editing for reasons obvious:

Fandom and Length.

I originally thought it’d fit, but unfortunately for me it didn’t. So I was persistent and managed to get all ^{^THAT}^ out of it.

Please let me know if there are any funny sounding sentences, grammar issues, spelling problems etc. (Awful things like those little buggers can happen in re-editing… D:)

If you want to see the original, here’s the link:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5228350/1/Learning_Love

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That was very deep. I know your prolly going to call me perv for this……. >_< But you spelled intercourse wrong. It’s just something I noticed ok! Sometimes I’m surprised to see the things that you come up with yourself. Your not a bad writer Akitore. You just need more self-confidence in your work. 5 PENCILS!

Thoughtful and sincere. The second to last paragraph more intro than content, more ‘I am about to say’ than actually saying.