Great look at the abject misery and retchid state of mind that comes with addiction. I applaud your wholehearted leap into the mindframe.

Wow. Totally agree with THX. Nice work!

I liked it, although the Lou Reed quote was fitting, it seemed to be ancillary to the thought process.

Thanks for the comments!

I know what you mean, Krulltar. I was trying to find a way to name the addiction (per the challenge rules) that didn’t seem completely out of place. I agree that it sort of disrupted the flow, but it’s the best I could come up with.

Wow, this is a really powerful piece. Great work.