Tragic, through and through, from his misbegotten life to his failed plan at revenge. I don’t think it gets much more pathetic than the bitter, vengeful loser who can’t even execute his final act of defiance. Nice story.

Interestingly done. Kept me reading till the end. Great way of putting the phrase in there to. Great story.

Nicely Done! I enjoyed the variation of the line! I am curious though how did the receptionist know?

Well, in my mind, the men that entered talked to her and told her why they were looking for him. But it also could lead to a prequel that could tell a different story.

I think the receptionist is in on it…never trust the receptionist…she knows too much!!! Good story!