Good writing, but watch those compound adjectives, requiring a hyphen in between.

ok I’ll keep an eye out

http://www.grammar-monster.com/lessons/hyphens_in_compound_adjectives.htm

haha thanks. I think I’ll take a look at what they have about commas if they have a sectionfor that too.

I love the phrase “firefly ballet.” Good imagery.

very creative and i do love the phrase “firefly ballet”