Beautifully done. This didn’t seem like a patchwork of ideas trying to avoid the “th”, it flowed nicely. and is a great story angst-giving story that most people can relate to.

Thanks, as always, for the input Krulltar. My family makes for some rich raw story material.

Awesome. Just pure, unadulterated reflection upon classic familial dysfunction. Really nice way with words throughout. Loved the line about ‘a particularly confining closet’. Did not even notice the lack of ‘th’.

I love this, stargazer! Like THX, didn’t even notice the lack of “th” and wouldn’t have if I didn’t notice what challenge it was in. Hope you are cross-entering in the Thanksgiving challenge!