Great job of capturing the ambience. And this should definitely be an episode on Heroes.

Nicely done!

A mindreading telekinetic assassin that understand anatomy…wonderfully original and I loved the Egyptian setting.

You are awesome. This is one of my favorite methods of killing someone ever. I hate that people with telekinesis never do this.

I like how the character seems to absolutely comfortable with the kill. Like he might as well be washing some dishes. Reminds me very much of Noel from the Wild Cards series.

Wickedly precise!

Just the ability to dream these stories up while doing mindless activities is a form of telekinesis I reckon. Reminds me of “Our man in Havanna.” only in so far as the preciseness of dress and demeanour of the main character.

Ouch. Lethal. And if he works for someone, it really makes you wonder what kind of boss he has to keep him under control… Really interesting premise, glad to see you’ve got a sequel after all this time! MH :)