It’s good!!!!!

Nice. I like the double entendre inherent in “make you breakfast in bed”. Reminds me of that Saturday morning thing where the kid says, “Can you make me a banana?” “Okay, you’re a banana!”

Good song, too.

This was really good. Not overly belabored as some of the other “vore” stories. and I like the cut to the flashback scene in the karoke bar. Subtle dialogue references to the Couning Crows song with a hint of sexual playfulness. Just one complaint: You got the melancholy Round Here stuck in my head.

BTW, when are you going to get a pic ? :)

hey this was an awesome piece of short fiction, i am jusy wondering why such a talented writer has no pic?