this provoked an eeevil chuckle.mmmhhmhhm. noice job.

I wonder if they actually get cases like that lol I wouldn’t want to work that shift :D

Interesting! I like it!

bone chilling and well written

Chilling end. I like how it turns the moment on the condescending interviewer. I think that comma is out of place, right in the first sentence.

weird but good.

I liked it!

crazy lady’s a comin’ ta kill ya! gr8 story

Congratulations Illusionistic, this is a featured story. Well done.

Man, that’s eerie! But really rather well done. I like thie idea of this being a short; I’m not one for this sort of stuff, but I’m inclined to say I’m curious as to how this would play out on screen.

And congrats on the feature!

A dialogue like that would certainly lead to certification in a Psych ward…but what if it is true about the “aliens”. (who cares I’m outa here) door slams shut.

wow, nice story. I’d hate to be the person asking the questions.

The only critique I can make was the word ‘always’ in front of ‘big and has so many lights’ when describing the ship because I thought this was a one time event, not a repeated alien abduction…
The twist was good, though in a way I expected it. Maybe I’ve read one too many alien abduction stories? I like that they are in her head though, and I’d like to see more of HOW they are in there, are they transmitting to her, or are they IN there?
Great dialogue, love the use of the dots to pause and up the suspense.
I hope the therapist has good reflexes.