A little weird!

nickie your soo funny! good plot but you need better punctuation. also it should be a little more organized. btw coookkkkkkkkkkkkkkkie monsterrrrrr

Woohoo! It’s Glenda the good witch of the north!

I like how not all witches are evil.

A hard read all mashed together in one long paragraph. I like the idea/concept and this character, but a lot of little grammar and typo things are distracting. For instance, it’s mostly past tense, but then she is sure in the present tense that the shop owner will be happy in the future tense.
Picky, I know, but things like that will detract from your story.

Cute story line! ***Check your punctuation and spelling