Wow, the series seriously has 42 parts? That’s a long one. I liked the back and forth, nothing ground-breaking or genre-defining, but it felt real and gave some subtle detailing/characterization. The sentence that starts, “The last name…” was entirely too long and could have been two or three sentences.
It’s actually going to be even longer. This could feasibly reach 70 or 80 parts, though I’d like to make it 100. And thanks, I’ll go see about editing that.
I’m really enjoying reading these! I started a story myself called becoming Sophia a while ago and I looked it up on Google to se eif there were any others! And yours came up here and I’ve now joined! So thank you!