That sounds ominous somehow, though I haven’t read the previous bits. Her use of ‘baby’ seemed to hint a touch of worldliness on her part, though the rest of the scene seems to paint her as potential ingenue and victim. I like the layers and mystery though.

p.s. Seeing a lot of posting from you. Have you taken the time to do some reading and commenting? Just wondering, encouraging, kibitzing.

That’s cool, thanks for reading. I have been reading and commenting etc. but when I’m in college it’s just easier to write as it blocks some pages and a little box always comes up before I can do anything! haha!