Thought I saw where you were going with this, but you lost me. Was that a bit of an Oedipal/Elektra theme in the beginning? Then it swerves into semi-Paganism? And we end with a cheap ‘bitch’ joke and well-used gender reversal for the basic god designation.
I don’t usually rate poetry, but based on the whole series, I think the 1 pencil is unfair. It was really much better than that, even if I think you lost your thread there at the end.

Great poem! You have talent, young Atheist.

why thanks