Ooh, I have a Jeff too. And I have about fifty unsent letters for him.

Man, Stargazer, this is a touching, painful, and confronting piece! It’s beautifuly written too, and I wanted to find out what the ending was going to be – until I got there.

Ouch.

Wonderful composition. I love the twist, although of course it is painful. Very nice!

@scratch, thank you for reading and commenting. I really appreciate feedback.

This is a very beautiful, painful and compelling story. Bravo.