I know where this is going but I still really want to read more! Starting to sound totally adorable :) But otherwise very good imagery :P

Yay for giving blowjobs! XD
anyway, I’ve cummed enough. kind of distracted me. I’ve been debating whether that’s actually a word. Should it be “I came enough”? or is it really cum, came, cummed… swim, swam, swum. That’s a noodle scratcher.
Otherwise it was good and I liked the Pretty Woman reference lol

@ Raegan, well, I’m not exactly sure if its a word, but came would be kind of awkward seeing as its not come, its cum.

Ha! The flexibility of English, with its proud refusal of formal definitions… Mr. Gabriel, go read some erotica that’s not written by somebody who has acted in porno. It actually is come as in come to Jesus, come to glory, come together right now over me. However, English isn’t formally defined, we allow the words to change meaning and spelling, and add new words every year, and it’s common usage that determines definitions in our language. So really, come and cum are homonymic synonyms, or in a more vulgar manner, cum is a bastardization of the spelling of come.

Well, I’m sorry, but;

A. Its his dialouge.An exact quote from him. So it can be spelled however its pronounced or said.

B. Being as I have alot to learn, there really is no need to get snippy. I take criticism very well, but that does not mean that I need to be told so rudely. I made a mistake. I thought it was a different word, sorry for being a teenager.

Oral; it just rolls off the tongue, doesn’t it?
I’d say it sucks off. ;D

AND DO IT FOR SCIENCE IS WRONG! Mine eyes hath seen the glorious print that is erotica, as it can only be seen as glorious, and let me say that the “bastardization” he speaks of is invalid. “Cum” is meant to differentiate between “come here” and “cum on my face, bitch”. So rock on with your bad self and ignore silly flames.

uhoh! she’s going to fall in love with him.

I don’t see any rudeness, and I think they both are right. I don’t see the argument. As a writer you choose how to word it to fit your style, just remembering to spell correctly so the ninjas do not descend.

It’s ‘cummed’ – trust the dodgy mind.
It almost starts like any ordinary fuck, then turns around when he tells her to stop…