Whoa, whoa, whoa. I think you are confused. You don’t love somebody if you can consider killing them because they don’t love you back.

But then again, this is from a Letters Unsent challenge, and this is Ficly.

I’m keepin’ my eye on you…

possessive psychotic love…yeah, it’s best this is unsent, otherwise she’d have more stuff for the restraining order.

This is actually a beautiful letter, except for the end, and it sounds like he has a great relationship. I don’t think he really wanted to kill her… it was just an expression of a mix of intense frustration, disappointment, and humiliation. He really just wants to kill the part of her that does not love him enough… very sad and lovely at the same time. Bravo.

This is great, scratch. That killing line is definitely shocking, but I think yourfavorite is probably closest to the mark on analysis. Well done! I’ll refrain from rating for now since I am the judge and all. ;-)

Unrequited love sucks. Been there and done that. Your writing is very accessible and touches memories. Very good.

arrrgh, unrequited love :‘(
The beginning was beautifully written and I think everyone has at least heard of one person who thought "If I can’t have you, no one can."

Very powerful stuff. I like the repetition of ‘ever’ at the beginning and end.

Hey scratch. Congrats on the feature. Ambivilance,love v/s hate, the sport of kings and queens. Orated over centuries and it still brings us to tears. Well done.

Loved this.