First off, Welcome To Ficly! Get a pic! This is very funny, and George seems to have some Homer Simpson undertones. My only complaint is with spacing. Because of Ficly’s layout, this comes across as a wall of words, and could use some line feeds which would make this an easier read.
First off, Welcome To Ficly! Get a pic!
This is very funny, and George seems to have some Homer Simpson undertones. My only complaint is with spacing. Because of Ficly’s layout, this comes across as a wall of words, and could use some line feeds which would make this an easier read.
Thank you for your comments! I will keep this in mind when I go back for revisions. I am hoping to get a better grip on my grammar and format soon.
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