“You’ve got a little “got got” in there…”

I fixed that – and a couple of other errors as well.

Now reads a little more smoothly (I hope).

Why does Satan always make for such a sympathetic guy?

Aha, another great piece that offends my religion but delights me. Thanks and sshhh!

Deleted my old comments. Commenting again to make sure my rating sticks around and to say that this rocks.

Oh my God this actually made me laugh!

This was amazingly intriguing!

lol i can’t believe i’m typing this but, poor Satan. everyone is blaming him. XD really great story. awesome job.