I loved the wordplay very clever.

Ditto from me. The wordplay was great, was coherent, and I got a giggle because my daughter will be going to Uni in a Kearney in the fall :) Five pencils from me :)

indeed, very clever, made me smile! Makes me want to go to a circus, but also wary of one. Carni is a little scary. with those naked bears and axes..
Welcome to Ficly, and have some fun.

Hey, you’re back! Awesome use of rhyme and homophones, to be a little technical about it. There were a few spots that I think had rhythm issues, but overall it was really nice.

I smiled. As a homophone broker I endorse this entry.