Typical love.

I like it. Easy to follow.

One mistake. I think you meant to capitalize Lane’s name in the first sentence.

I was a bit lost. At first I thought they were brother and sister, but then it has a relationship feel. They both happen to be orphans.
Not sure what to make of your sentence structures. The last one of the first paragraph, for instance, is really oddly put together. I can’t tell if you’re over-reaching to be artful or English isn’t your first language. I don’t say that as a slam, just that I know foreign languages have a different way of structuring things that doesn’t always translate.