I like this story a lot! Atheist, have you ever thought of writing a story COMPLETELY out of your genre?Anyway loved it!
perhaps…
Cute little morality tale with a point. Not a whole lot of story, but it works for what it is.
I liked the ending, it was a real “aha!” moment lol and I’m part Cherokee :)
Very good story!
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I remember hearing this story at a worship night once, a couple of years ago! Nice work Atheist, great little tale.