This is pretty good :)
It’s always good to experiment with genres outside your comfort zone.

The sentiment is there, that the person is valuable. It floats between thoughts, for a dreamy feel. It’s not mushy, kinda bittersweet. Great effort at a new genre! I know my attempt would be horrible, but I may try.

I like the repetition of words within a line, very gothic era poetry.
Good work.

thanks

Amazing, amazing work!
It really is beautiful and well written
Whoever you are, Atheist, you are one romantic! :P
Amazing, I love it! Well done! xxx