A little blurry on details, but isn’t most children’s stories. I’m not sure ‘incorporeal’ is a word that would be in a children’s story, though.

ah but this is full of telling, so you must really be a descriptive writer.This has the feel of being written by a child too, not an insult, no, a compliment! You have captured the free thinking of a child. Of course they had ice cream!

Thanks for the kind comments. :)

Haha, I enjoyed this little story very much. :-)