Oh my…what an off-the-wall topic to write about!

You get points purely for writing about something so out-of-the-ordinary, but I’m still sooo amazed that a female could write so ‘familiarly’ about such a topic…

scratch has noticed a trend, you writing from a male perspective.. hmm. :P
Ew, 10 yr old lust, ew, scary, and just uk, pedophiles. Creeps. The ending is a valid point, will he? He needs some therapy..

It’s for the challenge ‘me? a predator’.

scratch-I read a lot of crime novels so perhaps that’s where my inspiration comes from.

LoA-I like writing about things that have nothing to do with me, so I guess a males perspective is a good way to do so.

Wow that is intense, and I’ve often wondered if predator’s worried if they’d have those thoughts about their own children.

That man is utterly gross. Like ewwww.

Freaked me out, major kudos for that!

Covering my eyes and cowering. Simultaneously excellent and terrifying.

thanks :o)