A very nice take on the term ‘pillow talk’. I was hoping someone would do something a bit different with it and you have.

There were a few repetitions of defence but I actually think it works. Overall very well done.

thank you :o)

Wow, you are dark! I wonder if I’ll find lighter fare in your more recent works.

ha, yes I tend to write that way..I think it’s all the crime novels I read.