This reminds me of many window-gazing sessions I engaged in at school. Very intriguing, I’d love to see where it goes… could I write a sequel?

The whole point of ficly is writing sequels. You don’t need to ask, just write if you want to. Though I’d hope you were keeping track of the story thus far. :)

As for THX: nice sequel. It reminds me of what Raymond Chandler used to say about writing—whenever he got stuck, he would have someone come through the door with a gun. This seems to be the same in principle.

Ha! and I love your bite out of school text books; because its always true that text books are Never.. well, true. lol

I like this – I sure remember wishing that a giant robot would come rescue me from a boring class.