Ooh, weird little moment. Really makes one wonder what exactly is going on. Nice little hint at some story possibilities.

Thanks very much! I’m still getting a feel for what can be done within the char. limit, but I’m loving Ficly so far.

well, i have no idea what those meds are for, to see her brother, obviously, but what sort of illness does that? wow.

I’m curious about what illness she could possibly have, too.

Great use of sparse prose. I dig the diary format you used as well.

Freaky Deaky!
In a good way