Comments on Top of the Food Chain by ElshaHawk (LoA)

Nymphaea Rose

Ooo different take on the idea of being a predator. Very good idea.
- Posted about 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Blossom Ruoquen (LoA)

two small things: “super sensitive” should be connected by one of the straight thingies (sorry I can’t think of the name. headache) like so Super-sensitive. Second, when you mention putting peanut butter on the mouse trap, maybe make it plural, because then you list multiple locations that you place them. I really thought this was funny though. I don’t think they make good pets either; but I DO think they’re cute :P
- Posted about 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
ElshaHawk (LoA)

fixed it, thanks Blossom! I don’t mind rodents in cages, but scurrying around my house and chewing up my stuff, food and otherwise, is an act of treason. WAR!
- Posted about 10 years ago.
ethelthefrog

Blossom: Hyphen.

Nice take on the challenge, Elsha.
- Posted about 10 years ago.
mama murph (LoA)

that’s why you get a cat………LUNCH IS SERVED!!!
- Posted about 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
ElshaHawk (LoA)

hubby is allergic to cats.. and so are my parents.. hmm.. my parents couldn’t visit.. lol, j/k
- Posted about 10 years ago.
Clotifoth

I was thought you were talking about bears for a second O_O
- Posted about 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
ElshaHawk (LoA)

hahaha! yeah, they are fuzzy…
- Posted about 10 years ago.